Gazette column: Because of the Philae robot, school science must inspire

20 Nov

It’s “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my weekly Gazette newspaper column to my blog so you can have a read…

This week my column for the Gloucestershire Gazette is about school science and how, following the Rosetta satellite landing and its Philae robot probe, its time science inspired a new generation. To read it, simply click to my Column page.

What do you think? Let me know.

**Look out for  Wednesday Wafflings next, well, Wednesday, where I post the latest entry in My Diary of a Hopeful Author**

Top five writing tips: How to make scenes real #amwriting #NaNoWriMo2014

19 Nov

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This week: How to make scenes real

Writing fiction, ironically, is all about keeping it real. And by this, I mean making stuff up. Confused? Let me explain. When we think of a room, we don’t recall it as a building or a space or a room. Nope. We remember the room as warm or with white walls, with leather seats or flowery curtains. If we reflect on past events in our lives and look closer, we come to understand that what makes them real in our mind are the sounds, sights and feel of things. So to make your scenes real in your book, this is what you have to do. You have to paint the real picture.

And so to the top 5 of keeping it real…

1. Show don’t tell. You want to recreate a scene, not describe it. Show us what the character can see in that room or countryside or beach setting. So, instead of “I arrived nervously at the old house near the sea” (telling), say “I arrived at the cottage, white washed walls, flowers in broken pots by the door. I stood at the end of the path, hand on the peeling gate, waiting, shaking. I inhaled, tried to steady myself, the faint lap of the waves, the squall of the seagulls all singing like a lullaby in my ears.” (showing).

2. Practice describing colours. Sounds nuts, but it works. Imagine you are describing the colour red, for example, to a blind person. How would you do that? Hot, scorching etc.

3. Give details not judgements. An author’s job is to give the facts then know when to step back so the readers can reach their own conclusions.

4. Names are everything. Its sounds minor, a name, but it means a heck of a lot. In real life, so much is attached to our names. On the page, a name connected to a character, a well thought through name, anchors the writer to the page. If the name is not well considered, the reader can sense that because the character does not, ultimately, feel real.

5. Visualise. Try to imagine what is in a scene. Close you eyes, picture the scene you are trying to write about. Now open your eyes. What details did you pick up on? What was the weather? The temperature? etc. Write it down as accurately as you can. I use this technique a lot when I feel a scene slipping away from me.

 

Any top tips on keeping your writing real? Great. Share them with the group.

 

**Out tomorrow “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my latest Gazette newspaper column to my blog…**

Gazette column: Hello. I’m an immigrant. Are you going to ask me to leave?

13 Nov

It’s “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my weekly Gazette newspaper column to my blog so you can have a read…

This week my column for the Gloucestershire Gazette is about change and how, yet, with immigration, heck even with things such as a proposal for new solar panels in a field, this nation of ours won’t accept it, won’t accept anything new. It’s time that changed. To read it, simply click to my Column page.

What do you think? Let me know.

**Look out for  Wednesday Wafflings next, well, Wednesday, where I post the latest entry in My Diary of a Hopeful Author**

Top five writing tips: How to find your writing style #amwriting #NaNoWriMo2014

12 Nov

Welcome to my new post: Top 5 writing tipstop5

 

This week: Finding your style

This has to be one of the most confusing elements of being a writer, I think. Certainly, when you’re starting out, style is something that feels elusive, like something others have but you never yourself quite know how to get.

And so we often end up copying others we admire, try to emulate their style. I know I’ve done this in the past. But thing is, get your own style, nail your individual writing nuance and what you end up with is something every writer, publisher – and reader – wants: a unique voice.

So fear not! Here are some top tips that I used myself to help crack my style. Give them a go, see how you fair. Good luck.

1. Read a piece of your writing aloud and in your mind. Mark out any dodgy bits, anything that sounds clunky. Then rewrite, re-read aloud, see if it sounds better. Repeat several times until you get a flow.

2. Knock out those adverbs and adjectives. These are like parsley garnish on a steak – unnecessary. What they can do is cloud your real style. We use them because we think we have to, but we don’t. Challenge yourself.

3. Go a bit further with this and write a piece, say 500 words, with absolutely no adverbs or adjectives in. It will be tricky at first, but it will get you style flowing, dancing, almost, off the page. Honest.

4. Don’t write. Trust me. Instead, sit back and just close your eyes. Then think. Think what you want to say. Take your main character, for example, imagine what they have to talk about, what scene they are in. Visualise it, every turn, every nook, smell, sight.

5. Now open you eyes and write what you have just seen. Don’t dither, don’t doubt or question yourself, just get it out. Try this several times and see how you can reach a steady flow of your own style.

 

Any top tips on cracking your writer’s style? Great! Share them with the group!

 

 

**Out tomorrow “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my latest Gazette newspaper column to my blog…**

Gazette column: Fuel poverty is a real crisis

6 Nov

It’s “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my weekly Gazette newspaper column to my blog so you can have a read…

This week my column for the Gloucestershire Gazette is about fuel poverty and how just by telling people to keep warm this winter, for some, it is simply not enough to help them stay alive. To read it, simply click to my Column page.

What do you think? Let me know.

**Look out for  Wednesday Wafflings next, well, Wednesday, where I post the latest entry in My Diary of a Hopeful Author**

Gazette column: It’s time drivers gave cyclists some room

6 Nov

It’s “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my weekly Gazette newspaper column to my blog so you can have a read…

This week my column for the Gloucestershire Gazette is about fuel poverty and how just by telling people to keep warm this winter, for some, it is simply not enough to help them stay alive. To read it, simply click to my Column page.

What do you think? Let me know.

**Look out for  Wednesday Wafflings next, well, Wednesday, where I post the latest entry in My Diary of a Hopeful Author**

NEW POST: Top five writing tips #amwriting

5 Nov

Welcome to my new post: Top 5 writing tips!top5

How’s you? You like change, right? Well, me too. And so to this new post. Top 5 writing tips is here to  replace my previous ‘Diary of a hopeful author’ a) because tis time for, you know, a change, and b) I’m so busy (disorganised) this is a quicker route to me still blogging to you.

The reason, though, for this change malarky, is good. Honest. My thriller book The Spider In The Corner Of The Room is due out next Spring/Summer 2015 around the world, and my head is absorbed in writing book 2 now of the trilogy. But not a lass to forget anyone, I had to rethink the blog thing so I could, well, keep in touch. And, ta-da! Enter the top 5 tips. See? Hmmm….

So, every Wednesday, I’ll attempt to post my top 5 writing tips of the week related to where I am in my own writing process, sort of. You get the idea. I’ll give each tip post a theme, basically, and hope it gives you a literary leg up, as it were. So, without further a do, here goes on the first one. Cue drum roll…

 

TOP 5 WRITING TIPS: Writer’s block

Stuck in a writing rut & can’t get out of your funk? Me too! Here’s my top 5 tips on how to get your writing mojo back….

  1. Get out! Go on. Go! Sometimes just getting some fresh air can reboot the brain, helps you think through ideas. I like a run…
  2. Tell yourself positive things. Keep saying ‘I can’t do this?’ Stop! Now. You hear? Now write down positive stuff that you can keep referring to, like ‘Yes, I can’ (thanks, Barack) or, ‘If others can, so can I’. You get the idea.
  3. Just write anything. And I mean anything. We try to get it right first time, but that’s not really required. It’s easy to edit a full page of words than a blank one. Who cares if it sucks first time round? Mine always does. So just get it out then edit later. That can sometimes kick start things.
  4. End the day in the middle of a scene. This will maintain momentum, even leaving an unfinished sentence can kickstart the next day’s writing.
  5. Give yourself a break. If all else fails, walk away, come back later. Just like an athlete, too much training will wear you out. Take a break, regroup, have a party – whatever it takes – then go back. You’ll feel refreshed. And perhaps slightly hungover. You’re welcome!

 

Any top tips on writer’s block? Great! Share them with the group!

 

 

**Out tomorrow “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my latest Gazette newspaper column to my blog…**

Gazette column: We, the community, deserve a better bus service

30 Oct

It’s “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my weekly Gazette newspaper column to my blog so you can have a read…

This week my column for the Gloucestershire Gazette is about bus services and how, with the axing of the number 21 service in Dursley by Stagecoach, it’s time this privatisation domination changed, because we, the community – the electorate – deserve so much better. To read it, simply click to my Column page.

What do you think? Let me know.

**Look out for  Wednesday Wafflings next, well, Wednesday, where I post the latest entry in My Diary of a Hopeful Author**

Gazette column: When will the Catholic Church realise they have a problem?

23 Oct

It’s “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my weekly Gazette newspaper column to my blog so you can have a read…

This week my column for the Gloucestershire Gazette is about the Catholic Church and how inappropriate priests are still a huge problem. To read it, simply click to my Column page.

What do you think? Let me know.

**Look out for  Wednesday Wafflings next, well, Wednesday, where I post the latest entry in My Diary of a Hopeful Author**

Gazette column: Bombing Iraq is not the answer

16 Oct

It’s “Thursday Thoughts” where I post my weekly Gazette newspaper column to my blog so you can have a read…

This week my column for the Gloucestershire Gazette is about the recently announced booming of Iraq by USA and UK and allies, and why it is not the answer for peace. To read it, simply click to my Column page.

What do you think? Let me know.

**Look out for  Wednesday Wafflings next, well, Wednesday, where I post the latest entry in My Diary of a Hopeful Author**

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